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Originally Posted by JayBee
Now if he only would've started out, "It was a dark and stormy night...." 
Then he would've really had the makings of something there, and got my attention riveted on the story right off!  |
JayBee, I agree that the beginning is not very original.
But now I just can't wait to read your story starting with "it was a dark and stormy night..", it looks so exciting
