A 5 Baht Dance (The Full unabridged edition)

[pablo]

I don't know if it was love at first sight, but it was pretty close. She had the longest hair I'd ever seen, jet black and almost down to her waist. She had soft brown eyes that made my heart melt, long legs that just wouldn't quit and a figure to die for. She was naked except for a pair of black leather ankle boots with small chrome chains on the side. I think it was the boots that did it for me.

to be continued.....




Pablo

[David Giuseppe]

Originally Posted by Alfie

To get Attention

Judging by the average lenght of the posts on this forum, 3 parts split may be already not enough.
Some people here already proved they can't read more than a single simple sentence

[David Giuseppe]

Originally Posted by pablo

I don't know if it was love at first sight, but it was pretty close. She had the longest hair I'd ever seen, jet black and almost down to her waist. She had soft brown eyes that made my heart melt, long legs that just wouldn't quit and a figure to die for. She was naked except for a pair of black leather ankle boots with small chrome chains on the side. I think it was the boots that did it for me.

to be continued.....




Pablo

We all liked "Private dancer"....

[pablo]

Foiled again!!!!

Hey David, I for one enjoyed the installment's.

When's the next part due?



Pablo

[David Giuseppe]

Originally Posted by IRISH JONNY

here is part 3.i hope you enjoy it.........

My customer agreed to come in Thailand, because he “likes the scenery, the relaxed lifestyle and the great food, not for the women”. Until now he always told me that he is not attracted by Asian women. For him Chinese, Japanese, Korean, Vietnamese, etc, they are all gook with expressionless faces, chaotic gait, narrow hips and bucked teeth. I want him to get even with me. I want to open his eyes, I want him to have the time of his life and this place is strongly indicated to transform a forty years old zombie into a testosterone driven teenager. It will be for him the ultimate touristic experience as he will travel back in time toward his lost youth. He will forget everything and lose his mind. Also, I don’t want to spend our stay here just hoping from bar to bar with him and getting drunk every night. I need my fix of Thai girlfriend experience, I need my mind to be in turmoil, and I need to be in danger. But I can see he is already moved by Lek’s seductive attitude. But he needs a stronger nudge to loose control.

I ask Lek if she can do the pole dancing stuff; the way she walks I have great expectation on her. She said “OK, 5 Baht”. I hand her a 500 Baht note, and then she runs to the small platform just back in the bar under red spotlights. Dancing slowly first, she get synchronized to the beat of the music with feline swaying moves. She glides down the pole gyrating slowly; encircling tightly the chromed pole between her closed legs she crouches, her hands higher than her head, her back is slightly arched. Then she goes up effortlessly. Under the spotlight her skin looks very silky and smooth, are eyes are shining, her smile is beaming. She starts to plays with her legs, stroking the pole with her inner thighs, raising them alternately to the side up to a right angle, still following the rhythm of the music which is unexpectedly slow paced. Then while crouching again, her back turned to us, she lowers her hands along the pole, opens her legs in as sudden move and presses her sex on the pole as she tilts her body and her head backwards in an unrestrained ecstatic pose. From our place we can’t see … well what we can’t see is setting fire to our imagination thus igniting our desire. She goes up again as if by magic. Now she faces us, beaming. Everybody in soi Gonzo can see her dancing, but she makes believe she dances only for you. She adapts her moves accordingly to the feedback she gets from her prey and she also uses her eyes to hypnotize him. She is still gyrating but now she is working us with her behind. Now we can see only her ass, her spinning, swaying, wiggling, inviting ass, the same ass that seemed so small at the first look, now it is a world of its own to be conquered. Suddenly with her legs straight she arches her back making her miniskirt raise; our heart misses a beat. Now my client is bewildered, his mouth is gaping. He is muttering something where I understand only the word “danger” and he tries to recover a respectable bearing by lighting a cigarette. This is the right moment to stop this; he has to be left unsatisfied. Inside his head it must whirl like a tornado with Lek standing at the narrow end of the funnel, and a cloud of debris from all the contradictory thoughts and feelings that have been torn down from his shattered mind swirling around her. I wave back Lek.

I can see that in his head he is evaluating the possibilities: barfine Lek, not barfine Lek? I know that he has to be strong to resist, because he is not the kind of guy who goes with ******s even if they look like genuine girls in love. He is a man of principles. He believes he never paid for sex before, and that he will never have to. He doesn’t have to date, dine, wine, get to know or coax this girl, it is too easy, it can’t be true. Also, he feels guilty and ashamed for the raw desire that arose so quickly. He is wondering what kind of man he is to behave like this.
I know because I have been through the same dilemma and I’m still beating myself for having said “no” two years ago to the first Thai bargirl I met. Why, why did I say “no” when every cell of my body were saying “yes”? Her beautiful face has haunted my mind during many sleepless nights, her very simple words “I want to make you happy” echoing endlessly in my head.
Lek is cute, young, probably experimented and most of all willing. Where is the problem?

We are tired; the alcohol in our veins is dealing the deathblow to our weary bodies. But he orders an other round of drinks including ladydrinks. Lek starts to hug him, to rest her head on his shoulder. If her searching hand finds his hand, he is for it. Still no news from the 495 Baht change money. There is a giant flat panel TV in front of us. We don’t know what they aired before, may be soccer or news, but now we can’t ignore the program on display: close-up of ugly children faces that have huge malformations such as hare lip and the corresponding plastic surgery that can be done. It is a full reportage, and as nobody switch it off in the first minutes, it is probably going to last. Nobody seems to care, may be already too drunk to notice. You have to be a father or a mother to be deeply moved by such images, because the fear of breeding a monster has inevitably crossed your mind one day. My patient comes back to reality as if he has been punched in the stomach, the spell is broken, sorry Lek, he will not barfine you tonight.

It is only my second beer and my mood is not going to improve as I’m consistently asked for a new one by Joy. Can’t she see I’m not a heavy drinker? My stomach is flat, my eyes are not bleary, I can speak without stuttering and I don’t mistake a not overweight Thai woman with a world class model. It’s midnight, tomorrow we will go to Phi Phi Island, and we leave promising we will come back. I forget about the 495 Baht, we want to escape from the monstrous images.

Oh did I mention that the name of the bar is the Black Cat, just in front of the Lucky Bar, I should have paid attention.

Then I have no more choice that up-date my story especially for PHUKET-INFO.

[MrDK]

Originally Posted by David Giuseppe

The only thing you can established is that this story has been posted before on other websites

If the job was yours to begin with, simply state so and I doubt anyone would have a problem with cut and paste ... or then more accurately re-publish.
(If you already stated to somewhere I have over looked it).
If the job belongs to someone else, at a minimum state the source.

[ub2yoo]

Originally Posted by MrDK

If the job was yours to begin with, simply state so and I doubt anyone would have a problem with cut and paste ... or then more accurately re-publish.
(If you already stated to somewhere I have over looked it).
If the job belongs to someone else, at a minimum state the source.

I have no doubt it's DG's writing. While every attempt to write down a story must be appriciated, whether nice, good, perfect or even bad, if someone would cut/paste a story from someone else, for sure a more exciting one would have been chosen.

[dawsey]

Originally Posted by JayBee

Good suggestion! How about it, Dawsey?

Done as requested

[marc26]

who cares if it cut and paste??
i really dont see an issue

[ub2yoo]

Originally Posted by marc26

who cares if it cut and paste??
i really dont see an issue

I don't think there's an issue, you just missed a bit of a fun ping-pong game over the past 2 days. DG's a good sport taking it :-)

[brit]

Originally Posted by David Giuseppe

The only thing you can established is that this story has been posted before on other websites

Yeah but still cut & pasted...or what did you retype the whole thing here?!

I think the point wasn't that you were ripping off someone's article it's that why bother, the article is already out there for people to read or even you could just post a link...

[brit]

Originally Posted by ub2yoo

IJ, longest post ever I've seen from you 55555

Yeah another 5 paragraphs and he'd be half way into a Jaybee post

[Mav]

55555555555555.....well done IJ

Hope MadGonads like it

[ub2yoo]

Originally Posted by brit

Yeah but still cut & pasted...or what did you retype the whole thing here?!

I think the point wasn't that you were ripping off someone's article it's that why bother, the article is already out there for people to read or even you could just post a link...

Maybe M26 is right, don't make an issue out of it.

It's content for the forum, I just rather can read the story in one browser then opening it to another site.

I believe the forum server can handle one or two more posts Brit :-)

[David Giuseppe]

Originally Posted by brit

Yeah but still cut & pasted...or what did you retype the whole thing here?!

I think the point wasn't that you were ripping off someone's article it's that why bother, the article is already out there for people to read or even you could just post a link...

Writing is difficult. Trying to do it in a foreign language is even more trouble. But the most difficult thing is to overcome is the cultural gap. I need feedback and this site has the right features, but may be not the right audience.

It seems that all topics or initiatives that don't revolve about drinking and whoring are not welcomed.

I can understand also that some of the "senior" and regular members here can feel embarrassed by my post as they have no chance to show how knowledgeable they are.

My thanks to the friendly people who took the time to write a nice comment.

Gates Of Paradox

[ub2yoo]

Originally Posted by David Giuseppe

Writing is difficult. Trying to do it in a foreign language is even more trouble. But the most difficult thing is to overcome is the cultural gap. I need feedback and this site has the right features, but may be not the right audience.

It seems that all topics or initiatives that don't revolve about drinking and whoring are not welcomed.

I can understand also that some of the "senior" and regular members here can feel embarrassed by my post as they have no chance to show how knowledgeable they are.

My thanks to the friendly people who took the time to write a nice comment.

Gates Of Paradox

You should have said this about your intentions as an opening and I'm sure the whole thing would have been going way better for you :-)

Culture gap is also to overcome by trying to communicate in a better way.

[David Giuseppe]

Originally Posted by ub2yoo

You should have said this about your intentions as an opening and I'm sure the whole thing would have been going way better for you :-)

Culture gap is also to overcome by trying to communicate in a better way.

I felt there was no need to do any opening.

This is a good example of cultural (or generation?) gap. Why can't you take the events as they are coming?

Someone is posting a story; does it matter if it has been posted already somewhere else or if it is the writer trying to extend his audience or a fan that is just doing "copy" and "paste" (and do not tell me your are concerned about copyright)? Either you like or not the story period. Everything else is baloney.

[ub2yoo]

Originally Posted by David Giuseppe

I felt there was no need to do any opening.

This is a good example of cultural (or generation?) gap. Why can't you take the events as they are coming?

Someone is posting a story; does it matter if it has been posted already somewhere else or if it is the writer trying to extend his audience or a fan that is just doing "copy" and "paste" (and do not tell me your are concerned about copyright)? Either you like or not the story period. Everything else is baloney.

In general I would say you are right, on the other hand people on this board don't know you yet and a lot of others in the past have copy/pasted stuff written by others pretending they wrote it themself. Not so much worried about copyright, more about the lying/pretending part of it which is not appriciated.

Guess that's what worked a bit backwards, so, a bit of an opening would have worked miracles :-)

I would say, don't let that prevent you from writing up another story and try again

[Dodger]

DG it is not baloney, people on here were not aware whether you originally wrote it or just cut and pasted the report from another site.

If in hindsight you had explained who you were and that you had already posted it elsewhere but wanted our input or opinion, I think things would have been better.

You must realise that if someone just cut and pasted someone elses post from another site and inferred or claimed it was theirs, then of course that person would be open to ridicule, and deservedly so.

All you have to do now in my opinion, is state if you were the author of this post and why you posted it, stop trying to 'get back' at members who were suspicious or indeed incorrect about you, then write an original one for all of us.

[bangladiver]

how about just posting a link rather than inserting copious amounts of text into the page

also is it necessary for a reply to always include 'quote message in reply'? (cue similar now.....)

[ub2yoo]

Originally Posted by bangladiver

how about just posting a link rather than inserting copious amounts of text into the page

also is it necessary for a reply to always include 'quote message in reply'? (cue similar now.....)

If 10 people post around the same time, you will understand what a mess and confusion it would be if no one knows at the end to whom that particular comment or question was aimed to. Sometimes there's even confusion with quotes, go figure :-)

As for posting links, I think it's better to get a discussion going when the original content is readable in the first post.

Besides, it will also allow to quote some of the text if you want to comment on it. A bit difficult with only a link.

So, there you have it, quotes good, links bad 5555

ps: Purely just my opinion of cause

[marc26]

Originally Posted by bangladiver